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*~~~* creaks and slight movements of the front door were false alarms making me fall
i glared at the people around see if they cared 'bout my antiques but they were too absorbed in their own little worlds must've thought that im just another annoying git
as i pondered upon the dull grey door hoping that in a matter of seconds you will show to rescue me from this crowd of never-ending bore but you were nowhere in sight i felt misery ice cold inside
suddenly the door flew open my eyes fluttered, widely open i treasured your smile like a token never knew that you would come i felt all giddy as my heart starts to play the drum tho after that, my eyes never left the floor afraid of what they might show and i will never know to whom was the smile meant for
when your back was facing me, i stared at you longingly but not for too long or i'll be seen but sometimes i keep staring intentionally to see if you take the hints and marry me
but when u did caught me looking i wonder wot was the look in your eyes was it curiousity? was i just imagining it, that you were only being friendly?
Then our eyes lost contact as he was interrupted by his classmate my lovesick-puppy thoughts i tried to faze drawing our initials in a heart, a few more hours to waste
but my head shot up when i heard his voice talking to the other boys cute and frail, it aint no noise hey dont stop talking, where did the music go?!
I dont want to be afraid dont want to die in regret shut the brain, let hormones do the talking ooops. i meant let the heart do the talking or i will never rest n get all depressed
at the end of the day.... i had something to say........... but you were going in the oppsite direction ........n i am lonely again
all i wanted to say was that.. 'you're the one that i call hope' 'your face i wanna hold' 'baby dont go, dont go....'
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Member Posts: 30 |
Very good. That basically sums up my current life. there was nothing wrong with that | |
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Administrator Posts: 118 |
omw moony, first well done cos i know it was hard to post ur first poem n secondly i hope ur gonna post more cos that was beautiful n now ur gonna get to see that im not the only one who thinks that well done | |
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Site Owner Posts: 72 |
this is cooooooooooooool | |
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Member Posts: 18 |
WOW I AM SPEECHLESS AND THAT DOENST HAPPEN OFTEN REALLY WELL DONE HOPE THAT YOU WILL BE POSTING MORE SOON:) | |
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