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Momentum
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creaks and slight movements of the front door

were false alarms making me fall


 

 

i glared at the people around

see if they cared 'bout my antiques

but they were too absorbed in their own little worlds

must've thought that im just another annoying git


 

 

as i pondered upon the dull grey door

hoping that in a matter of seconds you will show

to rescue me from this crowd of never-ending bore

but you were nowhere in sight

i felt misery ice cold inside


 

 

suddenly the door flew open

my eyes fluttered, widely open

i treasured your smile like a token

never knew that you would come

i felt all giddy as my heart starts to play the drum

tho after that, my eyes never left the floor

afraid of what they might show

and i will never know

to whom was the smile meant for


 

 

when your back was facing me, i stared at you longingly

but not for too long or i'll be seen

but sometimes i keep staring intentionally

to see if you take the hints and marry me


 

 

but when u did caught me looking

i wonder wot was the look in your eyes

was it curiousity?

was i just imagining it, that you were only being friendly?

 

 


Then our eyes lost contact

as he was interrupted by his classmate

my lovesick-puppy thoughts i tried to faze

drawing our initials in a heart, a few more hours to waste


 

 

but my head shot up when i heard his voice

talking to the other boys

cute and frail, it aint no noise

hey dont stop talking, where did the music go?!


 

 

I dont want to be afraid

dont want to die in regret

shut the brain, let hormones do the talking

ooops. i meant let the heart do the talking

or i will never rest

n get all depressed


 

 

at the end of the day....

i had something to say...........

but you were going in the oppsite direction

........n i am lonely again


 

 

all i wanted to say was that..

'you're the one that i call hope'

'your face i wanna hold'

'baby dont go, dont go....'

 

 

 

 


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July 9, 2009 at 2:12 PM Flag Quote & Reply

Isaac
Member
Posts: 30

Very good. That basically sums up my current life. there was nothing wrong with that


July 9, 2009 at 2:17 PM Flag Quote & Reply

Cool_Dog
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Posts: 118

omw moony, first well done cos i know it was hard to post ur first poem

n secondly  i hope ur gonna post more cos that was beautiful

n now ur gonna get to see that im not the only one who thinks that


well done :)

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July 9, 2009 at 2:18 PM Flag Quote & Reply

NetSlum Gay Chat
Site Owner
Posts: 72

this is cooooooooooooool

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I don't do, I just am

July 11, 2009 at 6:55 AM Flag Quote & Reply

JUSTIN2108
Member
Posts: 18

WOW I AM SPEECHLESS AND THAT DOENST HAPPEN OFTEN REALLY WELL DONE HOPE THAT YOU WILL BE POSTING MORE SOON:)

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July 23, 2009 at 12:08 PM Flag Quote & Reply

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